Mystery story 31/05/2025 21:52

My mother-in-law discovered two children in an abandoned well, brought them to me, and entrusted me with their upbringing. I raised them as my own.


“Alyona, my dear, help me…”
— Maria Nikitichna’s voice shook as she stepped through the doorway, rain dripping from her shawl, two small bundles clutched tightly to her chest.

Alyona froze at the sink, the sponge slipping from her hand, the half-washed plate tilting toward the basin.

Outside, the rain was relentless. The dog paced nervously by the wall, unwilling to enter, letting out low, mournful howls. All morning, Alyona had felt something strange in the air — an inexplicable pressure, as if the world were holding its breath.

“What happened?” she asked, stepping forward quickly. Her mother-in-law’s face was soaked — with tears, not just rain.

“Here,” Maria Nikitichna whispered, unwrapping the first bundle. Inside was a baby boy, his face tight with cold, his eyes blinking slowly. He let out a small, broken squeak — not quite a cry, but a sound filled with helplessness. “There are two of them. A boy and a girl. We found them... in the old well.”

Alyona staggered. Her hand reached out instinctively, cradling the baby against her chest. He was damp, filthy, shivering. But he was alive — and his eyes were impossibly large, black, and unblinking as they stared into hers.

“In the well? The dry one by the birch trees? That hasn’t had water in years?”

“Yes. Just moss and rot left in it. But Sharik started barking like crazy when we passed by. He wouldn’t stop pulling me toward it. I thought maybe someone had thrown a kitten in… But then I heard them. Crying. We pulled them out with Petrovich.” Maria paused, breathless. “No one in the village knows anything. They’re not local. Abandoned. Just… left to die.”

Alyona pressed the baby to her chest, feeling the rapid thrum of his heart against hers.

For five years, she and Stepan had hoped. Five years of trying, praying, doctors, false hopes. Five years of nursery walls that echoed with silence.

“And the second?” she asked, her voice barely more than a breath.

“A girl. So small.” Maria unfolded the second blanket. Inside was the twin — her tiny features peaceful, her breath steady and slow.

The front door groaned open. Stepan stood there, soaked from head to toe, eyes wide at the sight before him.

“What’s going on?” he asked, voice cracking with confusion.

Maria quickly relayed the story. He listened silently, stepped forward, and touched the baby boy’s cheek. His hands trembled.

“Who could do this?” he murmured, pain threading through his voice.

“The district officer will come tomorrow,” Maria said. “I’ve already called. And the medic is on the way. They need to be checked, of course…”

Stepan turned to Alyona. He gently took the girl in his arms. Her eyelids fluttered open, and she stared at him, serious beyond her age.

“What will happen to them?” he asked.

“If no family is found, they’ll go to an orphanage,” Maria said quietly. “That’s what usually happens.”

A heavy silence followed.

Stepan looked at his wife. Then at his mother. Then back at the children in their arms.

“We’ll keep them,” he said. One sentence. But in it, years of longing and love unspoken.

“We’ll keep them,” Alyona echoed, tears finally spilling down her cheeks.

An hour later, the medic arrived. He checked the children thoroughly: they were roughly a year old, malnourished but unharmed. The fact they’d survived was miraculous.

That night, after the children had fallen asleep in a makeshift bed of blankets near the fire, Stepan sat beside Alyona.

“Do you still want this?” she asked softly.

“I do,” he said. “More than anything. Tomorrow, I’ll speak to the officer. The doctor. Whoever I need to. We’ll make this official.”

“And if the parents come back?”

“They won’t,” he said, his jaw clenched. “They already made their choice.”

Alyona leaned against his shoulder. Outside, the rain had slowed to a gentle hush. One of the babies stirred, and she got up to soothe them — her children, now.

She watched them for a long time as they slept. So close, so fragile — and yet, already part of her heart.

“What should we name them?” Stepan asked.

She smiled, the first genuine smile in years. “Nadya and Kostya.”

Hope and Steadfastness.


Five years later, the farm had transformed — greenhouses hummed with life, berries flourished in the sun, and laughter echoed through the yard.

“Mama, look!” Nadya rushed into the kitchen with a crayon drawing. “It’s our family!”

Alyona took it with a smile. Her daughter — golden-haired and irrepressibly joyful — bounced on her toes, eager for praise.

“And Kostya?” Alyona asked.

“With Grandma. She’s teaching him herbs again.”

Maria Nikitichna had become a devoted grandmother. Stern when needed, patient always. She had created a rhythm for the children — stories at night, soups brewed with love, a firm but kind hand.

Then came the phone call.

“Alyona! Come quick — Maria Nikitichna’s collapsed!”

Alyona ran without thinking. The garden, so full of light earlier, seemed dark now. Maria lay beside the strawberry patch. Kostya stood nearby, shaking, eyes wide with fear.

“She won’t wake up…”

Alyona dropped to her knees. Maria’s skin was cold, lips blue. A heart attack. It was already too late.

“Look after them…” Maria whispered. “They’ve always been yours…”

They were her last words.

Grief settled in the house like dust — heavy, choking. Stepan changed. He became distant, broken. The man who once cradled a baby with wonder now stared blankly out windows.

“I need to leave,” he finally said one night. “This place… it’s too much.”

Alyona, for the first time, raised her voice.

“The children need stability. They’ve already lost so much.”

But her words didn’t reach him. Wine replaced his warmth. The house echoed with silence and tension.

Then, one morning, there was a knock.

Her father — Viktor Sergeevich — stood at the door with a suitcase and eyes filled with concern.

“I heard things aren’t well. I’m here.”

He moved in, quietly. Repaired the shed. Cooked meals. Helped with homework. Built toys with Kostya. Told stories to Nadya. And without anyone noticing, he breathed life back into their home.

He even reached Stepan.

“Let’s fix the roof,” he offered one morning. “You and me.”

And they did. Nail by nail, story by story, healing slowly began.

Months passed. One day, Stepan turned to Alyona and whispered:

“Forgive me. I thought I lost myself. But I hadn’t. Not really.”

Viktor eventually sold his city apartment, bought a plot nearby. “For the grandchildren,” he said.


Years moved forward.

The twins were now teenagers. Nadya sketched fashion designs and dreamed of runways. Kostya wanted engines and speed.

“I’m done milking goats!” he cried one morning, dropping a bucket. “I’m fourteen, not forty!”

“Talk respectfully,” Stepan said. “And finish the job.”

“I’m building a moped,” Kostya said, daring. “Petka has three!”

Stepan nodded. “Ask Grandpa.”

And so, in the shed, the engine hummed to life — powered by two generations of tinkering hands.

Evenings were golden: sausages over fire, laughter around stories. Nadya unveiled dresses, Kostya tested machines. The warmth that filled their lives had taken root.

And one night, Alyona said:

“They don’t know the truth. Should we tell them?”

Stepan hesitated. “No. Let them be ours. They are.”

But the children knew.

One sunset, on the barn roof, they admitted it to each other.

“I saw the papers,” Kostya said. “We're adopted.”

Nadya was quiet for a long time. “Do you… feel different?”

“No. I feel lucky,” he said. “They saved us.”

They decided not to say anything.


At nineteen, they came home from university for a surprise visit. The farm had changed — new gazebo, solar panels, even an irrigation system.

“Where’s Grandpa?” they asked.

“In rehab,” Alyona said quietly. “A stroke.”

The next day, they visited him. He smiled, frail but proud.

“You’ve both grown,” he whispered.

When they were alone, Kostya asked, “Did you know… about us?”

Viktor looked at them with love. “Yes. I knew. And I loved you every day since.”

He squeezed their hands.

“You weren’t born from us. But you were chosen. And that’s the greatest love of all.”


That summer, they didn’t leave.

Kostya began automating the farm. Nadya came every weekend, helping and sketching.

One evening, Alyona asked, “Why? Why stay?”

Kostya looked at the stars.

“Because this is home. Our roots are here.”

“And the deepest roots,” Nadya added, “grow in old wells.”

Alyona trembled. She hadn’t expected those words.

But instead of fear, she felt peace.

“Thank you,” she whispered, holding them both.

That night, they sat in silence — not as parents and children, but as something stronger.

A family.

Not born, but built.

Not by blood — but by love.

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